I found out that the heavy metal rock band 'Slipknot' at 2005 (when i was 5 years old). I found out that the Slipknot uses masks. Also the drummer, Joey Jordison , played a solo drumming concert and in the concert he hit randomly also known as 'blasting'. Their album 'Revenous death' was released in the year 2007.
The band Slipknot is a heavy metal rock band. For sme people ,the are scary. Do you know they use masks, overtime they have concerts? Also know on knows why they used masks except the band themselves.
In the band, each of them is wild in shows and concerts. They have a drummer, two guitarists, on voclist and one bass player. In the end of some songs, they say "we won't leave until we say goodbye!" I think they are a band that we should remember.
capitalize the headline
BalasHapusfix punctuation and capitalization errors
add a few more details
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BalasHapusI think you should capitalize the headline and the first few words, add more details and don't talk too much about masks, we get it already!
First, change "I found out that the Slipknot uses masks" to "the members of Slipknot use masks". Second, change "know on" to "no one".
BalasHapus